Arby's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[-Orr-Meltdown [Preview]]

sweet

this is such a powerful track =)

Loving the distortion and the melodies.

holy crap it just picked up (listening to it right now) and it sounds awesome.

Thou must finish it now =)

DavidOrr responds:

Glad you enjoyed it. I'll be finishing it eventually, although Newgrounds may never see it.

Thanks for the review!

[-Steel train-]

revieweded

it sounded really industrial. my only complaint is that its really repetative. almost too much so.

Waterflame responds:

i kinda agree with you actually. ty!

[-Skyscraper- (techrock 3)]

hmmmm

i prefer the old version personally. this one doesn't quite feel like it fits togeather. the techno and the rock seem to clash in a bad way.

also, many of the notes seem too high and loud. espesially on the techno side.

[-Space pirates-]

holy

holy crap man..... you got your name changed and submited the best crap i've ever heard! =)

i got back to your audio page because i saw strikebeam on the industrial list. i was like some #$$%# noob called %^#$ waterflame stole @#$$% chainsaws $%#$% strikebeam song XD.

fthen i got to your page and was like.... holy crap did he steal all your songs? then i dawned on me XD

Anyways i love your happy techno style as always. its probably my fave syle on NG.

keep on rocking in the free world.

Waterflame responds:

hah, yeah i figured chainsaw_09 was kinda dull, since i originally tried to name myself chansaw, but it was taken back then, issnt now i think tho '>_> thanks alot! always nice to hear uplifting words like this :D

[Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall]

heyyyy

hehe, saw on of your reveiws somewhere and decided i'd check up on you again. I haven't visited your audio page since i pointed you in the general direction of the audio portal XD.

you have improved so dam much..... dam......

this is an awesome track. love some of the sounds you put in here such as the kettle, siren and the steam whistle. they add that extra reality sense and tie the songs to machinery. i love the voice too. wheres it from?

my real only complaint is the ending. that one instrument playing the slow melody just didn't fit with anything.

one thing that could be added is a lull. somewhere you can a section with pipes and perhaps a quiet metal precussion instument. then you can add a few shudders, crunches and whumps and a cresendoing melody to lead back into the song.

you said that this feels like its declining, well, then grab hold of that then. you can have it decline then drop to a lull then climb back up and cresendo. =P

anyways, good music and hope to hear more from you.

p.s. i never did finish that flash =P

itsameyayo responds:

Dude!!! Arby my man! Wazza!!!

-Wow! You've really provided a lot of advice. I may or may not use it, but I will have to consider you as a helper to my songs in determining flow, you've got it down.

-XD, I didn't think you would finish that flash. But still man, WHY'D YOU GIVE UP?!? JUST KEEP AT IT, DO YOUR BEST, NO MATTER WHAT!

Alright, anyways, thanks to you, I have as much reviews as one of ParagonX9's songs, and I plan to surpass her one day, every journey begins with the first step : )

-Thanks again man! You're teh BOMB!!!

-SuperDrummer146

[-Orr-Stormy Seas]

cool

funky. never heard anything in 5/4 before. and it sounds really cool =D

i love the way part of the song seems like a ship going through a storm then transitions to a part where its calm-sorta like going through the eye of the storm- then goes hard again =D

DavidOrr responds:

Ahh, you figured out exactly what I was try to portray. You know in the classic movies when everyone gets through a tough part and thinks everything is ok... but then an even bigger disaster hits them!

I love it when that happens :). Glad you liked the piece!

[Draze - Let The Party Burn]

wow

i might be listening to some of the benifits that ______ can provide.

(couldn't hear what it was XD)

Draze responds:

"You might be missing some of the benifits that sterio can provide"

:]

[_-=[The Maestro's Requiem]=-_]

T_T

T_T T_T T_T T_T T_T T_T cool song T_T

T_T T_T T_T whyyy do you guys have tooo gooooooo???

MaestroSorrow responds:

So that we can come back ten fold stronger!

Thanks for the review ^^.

[Evil-Dog - Memoirs of a Hero]

yayyyy

the ambient master rises again! =P

you'd better not stop here, or i'll come to your house and beat you with a wet noodle. =P

good song. =)

Evil-Dog responds:

Not a wet noodle!! ...please! :(
I'll try to make more ambient music regularly...but the problem is inspirational
thanks for the review :)

[*Demon* */ZeRoBaSs]

woooo

this reminded me kinda of housemastas dirty mixes execpt with no real apparent theme XD

awesome.

it doesn't fit togeather at all yet fits perfectly.

you really need to submit here more.

ZeRo-BaSs responds:

=D ty arby!